For your Draft #2 abstract, please consider the following:
a. an attention-grabber in the introduction line
b. provide background info (you must show research evidence )
c. state clearly the effects or implications
d. discuss exactly what you plan to investigate/find out
e. outline your research methods
Please consider hedging ( employ a neutral tone in your writing).
^^ please use the first paragraph (it’s really a good info). Then we can revise it a little. ^^
i have attach the previous work we did.